First, a joke: To quote one of my more uncouth reviewers, "Feh, get to the smex." LOL
Kidding aside, I see you made some improvements. Good for you! And yes, Eriol is messed up. Few people do that ne? The only other story I've seen this happen in is Aesha's "On the Edge" (the old version, anyway).
From Mei Ling
Kidding aside, I see you made some improvements. Good for you! And yes, Eriol is messed up. Few people do that ne? The only other story I've seen this happen in is Aesha's "On the Edge" (the old version, anyway).
So. Chapter 2? ^_^