I was going to write a separate comment, but I saw this in your reply, I'm rather fond of "a blip with one hell of a ripple effect." and I had to say something here. The reason is because, YES, that was my favorite line in the story.
It wasn't just that one line that I loved, though: I loved the whole story. 10 was so callous where Jack was concerned. I liked 10, other than that, but I hated that he treated Jack so horribly. It was great to read Ianto giving 10 a proverbial slap upside the head! Brilliant response to 10's behavior both in canon and in Choccy_grl's wonderful story!
Ripple effect!
It wasn't just that one line that I loved, though: I loved the whole story. 10 was so callous where Jack was concerned. I liked 10, other than that, but I hated that he treated Jack so horribly. It was great to read Ianto giving 10 a proverbial slap upside the head! Brilliant response to 10's behavior both in canon and in Choccy_grl's wonderful story!