Wow, that was quick! And you did not disappoint, this was even more than I could have hoped for :)
Absolutely brilliant! Ianto gave the Doctor a Time Out! That is absolutely inspired! I...don't even have words for how much I loved this story. It's the kind of Doctor meets Ianto story I've always wanted to read. I just...guh!
Adorable Ianto, caring for the Doctor with tea while imprisoning him, so cute and funny and so...Ianto!
I'll admit I was surprised at the length of Ianto's speech, and then it turned out that Ianto was just as surprised, which is completely in character I think. Oh, I loved that line "less psyhotic episode, more psychiatric episode" so very clever :)
And of course I loved the 'blip in time with one hell of a ripple effect'. I mean, how did you even think of that you wonderful person, you!
In short, I loved this, and I am totally fangirling you.
*** And, because you asked, there were a couple places where your verb tense slipped:
"And really, that’s what Ianto Jones is – he understands, completely, and that boggled him." I think it should be "Ianto Jones was - he understood" to keep it in past tense.
"made exactly the way the Doctor likes it." should be 'the way the Doctor liked it' for the same reasons as above :)
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Absolutely brilliant! Ianto gave the Doctor a Time Out! That is absolutely inspired! I...don't even have words for how much I loved this story. It's the kind of Doctor meets Ianto story I've always wanted to read. I just...guh!
Adorable Ianto, caring for the Doctor with tea while imprisoning him, so cute and funny and so...Ianto!
I'll admit I was surprised at the length of Ianto's speech, and then it turned out that Ianto was just as surprised, which is completely in character I think. Oh, I loved that line "less psyhotic episode, more psychiatric episode" so very clever :)
And of course I loved the 'blip in time with one hell of a ripple effect'. I mean, how did you even think of that you wonderful person, you!
In short, I loved this, and I am totally fangirling you.
***
And, because you asked, there were a couple places where your verb tense slipped:
"And really, that’s what Ianto Jones is – he understands, completely, and that boggled him." I think it should be "Ianto Jones was - he understood" to keep it in past tense.
"made exactly the way the Doctor likes it." should be 'the way the Doctor liked it' for the same reasons as above :)
BTW, I am totally saving this to memories :)