Your Ianto is so completely Ianto and the Doctor is at his most bemused - I can't imagine anyone but Ianto managing to make the Doctor feel like a small child sitting on the naughty stair, trying to work out why he's being punished.
I particularly love Ianto's explanation of Jack's reasons and motives for flirting. (Although at one point you say "He once asked me if he wanted me to stop flirting" - I think you got that bit the wrong way round!)
As for you description of the sound the TARDIS makes - I don't think it's ever been described better =)
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Your Ianto is so completely Ianto and the Doctor is at his most bemused - I can't imagine anyone but Ianto managing to make the Doctor feel like a small child sitting on the naughty stair, trying to work out why he's being punished.
I particularly love Ianto's explanation of Jack's reasons and motives for flirting. (Although at one point you say "He once asked me if he wanted me to stop flirting" - I think you got that bit the wrong way round!)
As for you description of the sound the TARDIS makes - I don't think it's ever been described better =)
A treat from start to finish.